rework logo for a tanning salon

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• September 17, 2012 3:34 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Emma, Sorry, we had to extend the project because we were out for a while and couldn't easily decide on any one design. Thank you for your nice work!
  
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• September 17, 2012 3:28 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Splashdesigns: We don't think we like how the tag line comes across in #64/#78 etc. We do want it to come across as in ***LIFE....in the sun*** without the actual dots but with them implied. Also the tag line may be too big and it seems like either all straight or all curved would be better for it. The palm trees may stand out too much or be too centered or something? They seem stuck in instead of a part of the scene. We think you are getting so close to the idea of what we are after but it doesn't feel like our own yet. Please give us a few more ideas.
  
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• September 17, 2012 3:06 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  dweedeku can you combine #57 and #32? We like almost everything about the font in 57 except the palm tree still seems too jagged and needs softened up. Can you add the sunset scene like in 57 but stick to the colors that match the Thomas Hammer coffee logo like you did in 57?
  
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• September 17, 2012 3:06 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  dweedeku can you combine #57 and #32? We like almost everything about the font in 57 except the palm tree still seems too jagged and needs softened up. Can you add the sunset scene like in 57 but stick to the colors that match the Thomas Hammer coffee logo like you did in 57?
  
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• September 07, 2012 6:00 PM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns, sorry, i meant #58 we like the color and layout but try it without "tanning co." and we like #73-- nice font and colors--could you have the palm lean in towards the word instead of out?
  
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• September 07, 2012 12:09 PM
   splashdesigns
   
  Hi, Thanks for the feedback. In your last comment (7 September, 11:57 AM), did you mean design #53 instead of 54? Submission 54 is by another designer. Thanks, Emma
  
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• September 07, 2012 11:57 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns, nice. we like the colors on #64, but the design of 54 the best. I think it may be better without "tanning Co." in it. Could you give us a "Sunsational Tanning Co." by itself, apart from the logo, maybe with a letter being a palm tree or connecting them in some way. That way we could put the name on the front of a tee shirt and the logo on the back. we still also like the full color version of #38 too! lots of choices. :-)
  
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• September 07, 2012 11:30 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Mariusdesigns, thanks for the input. we like the variety-wording in and also out of the logo--way to go! I think we decided to not do the bikini babe though. see what you can do without her.
  
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• September 07, 2012 11:21 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  nayda really like #56, and the "life in the sun" font on #30. Can you make a few changes on #56. Can you make the line above "sunsational" curvy, instead of flat, so it matches the bottom one? Could you try the blue and orange colors from hammercoffee.com. as well?
  
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• September 07, 2012 2:48 AM
   splashdesigns
   
  Hi Project Holder, Any feedback on the latest designs submitted? Thanks & regards, Emma
  
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• September 05, 2012 12:57 PM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns, We like the wicker-basket weave stuff around the outside on the small logo on 51. your designs look great. maybe sand on the inside and that texture on the outside on on the words??? the texture is sweet!!! maybe the word "Sunsational" could have a texture??? the chair looks like it was just dropped in rather than in a beach setting. maybe work with it a bit.
  
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• September 05, 2012 1:27 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  dweedeku, could you just do "Sunsational Tanning Co." with out any logo, but using the font and palms like you have done?
  
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• September 05, 2012 1:23 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  dweedeku, can you try the colors from hammercoffee.com? we like the design and layout, the palms look a bit too sharp and pointy instead of soft and relaxing.
  
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• September 05, 2012 1:21 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns, we like 39 and 41 alot. it seems like there is a bit too much empty space between the palm trees. maybe put a adirondack chair or put the trees together or bigger or fill in the space.
  
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• September 05, 2012 1:15 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  we are thinking we want to try for an orange/yellow and a blue for the 2 colors. you can see the colors at www.hammercoffee.com
  
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• September 05, 2012 1:09 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  validesign, we really like your designs. your work is amazing. Could you try a few different ideas with it? maybe make the palms bigger or sand? sun?
  
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• September 04, 2012 11:53 PM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  nadya, we like design #40. it seems like it could be better, but i'm not sure how. Could you write "Sunsational Tanning Co." in that font separate from the logo. Could you try making the "life in the sun" a font that is more fun.
  
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• September 04, 2012 1:23 PM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns, could you submit a design with just one color or maybe two just so we can see what it might look like.
  
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• September 04, 2012 3:04 AM
   splashdesigns
   
  Hello, Please check your inbox messages. Thanks and regards, Emma
  
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• September 04, 2012 1:59 AM
   splashdesigns
   
  Hi Diasozo, Thanks for your feedback and I am glad that you like my designs :) I will make the changes you suggested and upload the revised design soon. Regards, Emma
  
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• September 04, 2012 1:06 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  splashdesigns- We really like what you are doing. we like your #23. We like "Life" down below. The "In the Sun" seems too big and the grey band that its in seems too thick. The background color on the Sunsational banner seems like the wrong color. We really like the sand texture around the outside. can you try some different fonts? We like the cursive "life" . Can you try shrinking the palm trees?
  
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• September 04, 2012 12:58 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Validesign= we like your new designs-how you put it in a circle. it has a fast racy feel to it though. sweet looking, but not a relaxed, beachy, tanning feel. we want a banana leaf roof-palm tree-surf-sand-sun-type feel.
  
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• September 04, 2012 12:48 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Nadya- we really like #30 alot. We like the shading- it gives it a nice feel. we still like the font in 18 the best but dont like the font for the "life in the sun". We like how "Sunsational" sticks outside the circle a bit. try lengthening it a bit more or putting it in a banner we would also like LIFE distinguished from the rest of the text in some way. We feel the palm trees dont look right. Maybe they should be bent or maybe just one, or a cluster together or colored or???? Maybe some more color would work as well.
  
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• September 04, 2012 12:35 AM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  dweedeku= we like your #28 but it seems too busy- it needs to be more simple. the sun has too many pointy rays. make it more just round, also too many palms, also colors could be more warm maybe. the blue is nice but the orange is too red and the black seems too cold. also we dont like the girl for the i, so just a plain I like your other designs.
  
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• September 02, 2012 9:45 PM
   Diasozo
    Project Holder
  Ok, I think we like the #18 logo the best so far. We like The whole circle idea with the words and tag line incorporated. The palms need to be better and maybe better colors. We don't like the fonts on the tag line and you could try a different font with the word Sunsational as well. We like the "blingy" look on the fonts of #16. We like the colors on #12 but don't like the swirl on the sun.
  
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