American Child

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• September 19, 2010 3:12 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  #24 - sorry i had a misspell below. Meant open book from an edge view not bookworm:)
  
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• September 19, 2010 3:09 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  #23 Don't really like the heart. What if you had less color changes and did something with stars to the left of the logo? #21 What if you kept the look of the name, eliminated the child and used the tactic that you did in #22 to put the preschool and daycare arched above. Maybe then something in the middle there like stars r something patriotic? #24 Can you try a version with a little more traditional red and blue, eliminate the child, and put something in between the two text lines like an open bookworm an edge view? #9 Can you use a different symbol, perhaps working with the name more and stay with reds and blues?
  
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• September 18, 2010 10:35 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  Also #13-16. It is nice and clean. Just a little too much hospital looking for what we are doing.
  
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• September 18, 2010 10:33 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  #6 like the clean nature of it, but needs a little something style-wise or graphics #2 think it is a cool concept. I just think may be a little too abstract to catch it on a sign or at first glance #12 and #4. I like components of both of these. What about going more traditional reds and blues and graphics that incorporate patriotic theme? Stars? Flags? Kids with flags? Know it is easier for me to critique than create. Thanks for the work so far. :)
  
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• September 18, 2010 8:33 PM
   Dylan
   
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• September 18, 2010 1:51 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  Draft #6 is there a way to bring out the second line as more. Seems lighter than #8 and hard to distinguish the symbol in the middle
  
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• September 17, 2010 12:33 PM
   amchild
    Project Holder
  Draft #3 - American Child should be all on one line and Preschool and Child Care on the other
  
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